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Hiyashi Otoko; Registration
Topic Started: Nov 16 2007, 05:36 PM (382 Views)
Otoko
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Name: Hiyashi (family name) Otoko (first name)
Gender: Female
Role: Student
SID: 448431
Dorm: 106
Age: 18
City-State: Born and lived on the island of Bancho until she was 9. Lived in Hokosha Tengoku until 16.
Birthday: August 8 742

Appearance: Otoko is 5'3' and a small frame. She has small hips and breasts and was once called a boy in a kimono. Her hair is black, dead straight, and always done up. When it is down, it falls to her waist. Her left eye is black; the other one has a white film over it. She is completely blind in her right eye and has a horizontal scar the runs from the inside corner of her right eye, through it and continues on to her hair line. Her hair swoops down to cover the right side of her face, hiding her scar and white eye. She has a pretty oval face with high cheekbones. She has full lips and long lashes. She is 105 pounds.

Clothing: She wears a very colorful Uchikake (purples, red, white), tapered wooden clogs, large obi (black, red, gold, green and blue), Ribbed paper umbrella (blue and purple.) Otoko also has three double pronged hair pins. During the winter, she also wears a Michiyuki (Black with red and gold butterflies on it.)

Weapons: Otoko uses her hair pins as small daggers. She also uses throat needles (they do exist!) Uses a small piece of thin paper to stick a needle to the roof of her mouth. Licking the paper dissolves it, and then you can spit it (not a killing weapon.) A two foot wakizashi hidden inside the handle of the umbrella. Twist the bottom of the umbrella and pull it out. She also has a tendency to kick her clogs at people.

Personality: Otoko is very soft spoken and polite, and even when she angry, she doesn't show it. She doesn't trust people very easily and can have a sharp tongue. She is insecure about her size and become very envious and hostile to voluptuous women. Otoko has a soft spot of street children and those that are being taken advantage of, even if they are her enemies. Otoko enjoys singing, especially love songs, even if she doesn’t believe in it. Otoko doesn’t drink often because she becomes violent and angry. She also hates the lack of control she has while drunk.

Strength: Otoko is very good a close combat fighting, and stealth killing. She can hold her breath for an unnatural long time and fit into very awkward places (due to the training she was put trough.) She can move very quickly when she needs to.

Weakness: Because she is blind in one eye, Otoko has very bad depth perception, causing her to do poorly with ranged weapons. Also, she is not very strong and not skilled with any weapons bigger than a Wakizashi.

History: Otoko was born on a far off island ruled by warring gangs. She was the child of Hiyashi Ochi, a powerful gang lord and a prostitute (name unknown). Ochi's wife, Tsuchiko, learned of the prostitute shortly after Otoko was born. She killed the prostitute and took the child as her own, having only a son of similar age. Tochiji, Ochi and Tsuchiko's son, was only one at the time. When Otoko was 7, the Hiyashi gang was massacred by a rival gang, leaving Otoko and Tochiji as the only survivors. Otoko and Tochiji lived on the streets with a small group of children until she was 9. At that age, Otoko lost her eye by one of the older street boys for not giving her food to him, Tochiji could not save her because he was busy fighting off the boys friend. The leader of their gang, Tenzai, then betrayed Otoko and Tochiji, selling them into slavery. They were bought together by a rich Lord named Senbaku, and began to train them as his personal assassins (this consisted of holding them under water to increase their lung capacity and pulling on their joints to make them more flexible.) She was trained to use her 'charms' and 'get close' to her victims and then kill them. Her victims where usually guests a Senbaku's home. She and Tochiji would dispose of the bodies. At 12, Otoko became Senbaku's mistress against her will. She was tormented horribly by Senbaku's three sons, calling her a 'whore' and a 'boy in a kimono.' Her brother was regularly beaten by Senbaku's wife, Aio, out of anger. When Otoko was 15, her brother was sold by Senbaku's wife to cause pain to Otoko. This sent Otoko into a rampage of cold fury, and she killed Senbaku and his family. To this day she doesn’t know where he is. The past three years, Otoko has been wandering the land, and finally appeared at the Academy.
RP Sample: Otoko looked down upon Aio, her face was a mask of serenity, but inside she raged. This woman had caused so much pain in her life, pain for her brother and no amount of begging and pleading could ever keep her from her task.
Aio was cowering on the floor before her, sniveling in fear. “How could you?” Aio whispered, “After all we did for you two.”
“Easily” says Otoko, her voice emotionless. “You husband tortured us in the name of training, forced me into his bed, your sons called me horrible things and you treated my brother worse than a dog. It was very easy. And now, you are the last of your family.” She whimpered, eyes growing large with terror. “I killed Senbaku before he got his shirt off and I stabbed your sons in their sleep. All the guards are too drunk on the spiked wine I gave them; no help will come for you.”
Then Aio did the unexpected, she lunged at Otoko, fingers held out like claws. Otoko freed her throat needle and spat in into Aio eye. She stumbled, screaming as she brought her hands to her face. Otoko moved forward, stabbing Aio in the ribs with her Wakizashi. Aio died instantly, crumpling into a heap on the floor. Otoko retrieved her Wakizashi and left Senbaku’s manor, never to return again.

Special Power Suggestion: Lull. Causes the people around her minds to go into a blank and blissful state. She can use her power of suggestion on them, or just kill them. This only works sucsessfully on week minded people, it effect everyone in some degree. It causes Otoko to have extremely painful migraines that affect her vision and makes her sick, so she does not use it often.
Special Power: (Assigned by our own beautiful and equally as smart Adrestia)
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Aldaras
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Okay, right now I see one major problem, that to me sticks out like a sore thumb. The poison seems a bit excessive, and out of place for a military academy. That would mean that you would almost always guarantee to do major damage, or kill the person as long as you even scratched them. Next, the poison kinda hampers learning how to use your weapon, for the afore mentioned reason.

I personally would get rid of the poison.
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Okie dokie.

Any other problems?
I miss the playgrounds, and the animals and diggin' up worms. - Time to Pretend by MGMT.

"The youth are starting to change, are you starting to change. Are you? Together, together together."- The Youth by MGMT.

"Hey, Father. Did you know that somking is linked to erectile dysfunction. Ew."- Sadademort.

"I'm dead. That's as dysfunctional as you can possibly be."- Father Tiefer.
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Drestia
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[font=Arial][color=yellow] I don't like the poison a whole lot either.
You should name the place you're from, you can name it whatever you want.
Your power needs a few restrictions... we don't want powers that allow easy deaths, they aren't exactly fair.
Besides that, it's all good/
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Ok.
Um, let’s say that it only works on very, very week minded people. It' also gives her terrible migraines that effect her vision and makes her sick. So she doesn’t use it very often.

She comes from the Island of Bancho, and when her and Tochiji bought by Senbaku, they lived on a small main land county called Hokosha Tengoku.

By the way, with her clogs, she stands 5'6'.
I miss the playgrounds, and the animals and diggin' up worms. - Time to Pretend by MGMT.

"The youth are starting to change, are you starting to change. Are you? Together, together together."- The Youth by MGMT.

"Hey, Father. Did you know that somking is linked to erectile dysfunction. Ew."- Sadademort.

"I'm dead. That's as dysfunctional as you can possibly be."- Father Tiefer.
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Drestia
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[font=Arial][color=yellow]Sounds all good to me.
Just write the restrictions under the power part please and thank you.
Add in the names and the height if you'd like.
Do that and I think you're good.[/color][/font]
There's so much behind my smile that I can never show.

I never said to be like me, I say to be like you and make a difference. ~Marilyn Manson

I believe in everything until it's disproved. So I believe in fairies, the myths, dragons. It all exists, even if it's in your mind. Who's to say that dreams and nightmares aren't as real as the here and now? ~John Lennon
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Aldaras
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Was wondering, if she has bad depth perception, how can she use the throwing knives/ hair pins?
And could you please remove the poison.
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Otoko doesn’t throw them, just stabs.
For example, she could pretend to be fixing her hair, pull one out and stab the guy in the neck.

I updated it all.
I miss the playgrounds, and the animals and diggin' up worms. - Time to Pretend by MGMT.

"The youth are starting to change, are you starting to change. Are you? Together, together together."- The Youth by MGMT.

"Hey, Father. Did you know that somking is linked to erectile dysfunction. Ew."- Sadademort.

"I'm dead. That's as dysfunctional as you can possibly be."- Father Tiefer.
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Aldaras
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Okay, now I don't see anything wrong with it, so as it stands,

[i]I Accept[/i]
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[font=arial][color=yellow][i][b]Accepted[/i][/b][/color][/font]
There's so much behind my smile that I can never show.

I never said to be like me, I say to be like you and make a difference. ~Marilyn Manson

I believe in everything until it's disproved. So I believe in fairies, the myths, dragons. It all exists, even if it's in your mind. Who's to say that dreams and nightmares aren't as real as the here and now? ~John Lennon
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Otoko
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Yay! I can play now!
I miss the playgrounds, and the animals and diggin' up worms. - Time to Pretend by MGMT.

"The youth are starting to change, are you starting to change. Are you? Together, together together."- The Youth by MGMT.

"Hey, Father. Did you know that somking is linked to erectile dysfunction. Ew."- Sadademort.

"I'm dead. That's as dysfunctional as you can possibly be."- Father Tiefer.
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