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Feather Mist; Who say's you gotta play nice?
Topic Started: Nov 4 2007, 12:56 PM (410 Views)
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Name: Feather Mist more commonly called Thist
Gender:Female
Role: Student, maybe instructor later
SID: 291171
Dorm: 106
Age: 17
City-State: Necransia
Birthday: Winter Solstice 745

Appearance: Thist is 4'7” short for her kind. She has long blonde hair, slightly wavy but she hates it and wears it up alot. She has long legs which are her main way of getting drinks. Generally she seems small but that just adds to her quickness and hides how strong she is.

Clothing: Tight but maneuverable clothing, usually wears pants, shirts with long sleeves. The armor is strong. It armor consists of greaves, a breastplate, a mail collar, pauldron and boots.

Weapons: bow and hunting arrows, she makes herself. As well as target arrows for longer distances and sniping. Throwing knives, double bladed bat dagger.

Personality: Thist is normally very playful and fun, this is mainly a cover up for her built up anger from her past and she only shows her true emotions to the closest people to her, as a show of trust. However when it comes time to fight, she's completely serious and calm. That is to say until something hits her trigger and she snaps.

Strength: Highly skilled with bow and arrows, running(short distances)

Weakness: Thist is wears herself out in battle very quickly, she shows lack of self restraint and is easliy angered. She usually gets worn out most right after her trigger.(see special power) She is not strong in sword combat nor with her throwing daggers.

History: Born the bastard child of her father, an outlaw(name unknown), who raped her mother, Amelia. Amelia was native to Necransia and was murdered, before Thist's eyes as she hid in an old wall, by her father, who had heard of Thist and came to kill her, when Amelia refused to give her up, Thist's father killed her. After tearing apart the house looking for Thist, her father was killed by some or the nearby towns people. Thist then 7 years old stayed with her Uncle who raped her whenever he got drunk. Thist went to school and acted like nothing was wrong, she was always made fun of for being so short. When she turned 14 Thist killed her uncle and ran away.

RP Sample:
thump... thump... thump
[i]“oh no.” [/i]
thump
“Thist” Came the deep whisper .
thump “where are you Thist?”
thump [i]“not again, please no.” [/i]
thump “I'm coming Thist.”
I could hear the footsteps grow louder up the stairs, and soon my to began to creek open. “where are you Thist?” The covers flew off my bed.
“not asleep?” the floor creaked as he got to his knees to look under my bed.
[i]“not yet”[/i] I told myself. I could see him lift the bed skirt.
“not under it either?” He stood, The floor creaked under his feet, closer, closer. “not in the closet today are you?”
I let out a quiet snivel by accident, [i]“did he hear it?” [/i]
“you know I hate it when you HIDE!” the closet door flew open and I lunged from behind the clothes.
I Swung my bat blade in every which direction while screaming. I hit something, I could tell from his low groan and the warmth of blood that ran down my hand. His hand clenched around my neck and he threw me on the bed, I can see the deep cut I'd made on his arm, it hung limp at his side, but he still over powered me.
I felt his hand on my thigh, “no, please, no” I began to cry.
“SHUT UP!” he screamed and slapped his hand across my face, it burned but so did my rage. I began to struggle again, [i]“just a little longer”[/i] I tell myself.
I waited till I and his penis begin to penetrate, his hand loosened, I could breath again, he wasn't paying attention. Then in one quick movement I get my hand loose, still holding my bat blade I cut his penis in one fowel swoop. He screams and falls to the ground, blood pouring everywhere.
“I said no,” I look down at him through slitted eyes with a crooked smile. He knows what he's done, he knows he'll never do it again... not when I finish with him.

Special Power Suggestion: trigger, when combat gets tough she gets triggered to go crazy combat and uses all of her energy, then she needs to rest.
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[i]Just a question I gotta pose to the other Admin / S'up Mod's though:
Is it just me, or does the Academy attract a [/i][b][u]LOT[/u][/b] [i]of juvenile delinquents?

Just a question or three for Thist now:
So does this "Athsma" have anything to do with your Special Power in any way?
What exactly happens while your using your "Special Power" ?
Why does this RP sample sound like the long version of 3 Doors Down's "Sarah Yellin'" ?

On a different note:
[b]Bat Blade? [/b]
Like, Bat Man Boomerang style, double-as-knife-what-shanks-Joker Bat Man Boomerang?

Cool.

*Waiting on stamp back*[/i]
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asthma is just the best name i gould come up with for after she does her crazy shit assed attack then needs to rest.
Special power makes Thist go crazy and kill people
Sarah yellin what now?
and finally, bat blade, i have no idea what it's called,ut you've seen that thing hangin on my wall, kinda looks like bat wings to me, it's that thing
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[i]For the record, never seen it on your wall, Your Avi looks like a weird Quistis from FFVIII, "Sarah Yellin'" is a song by 3 Doors Down (as I mentioned before) about how a girl (presumably Sarah) was getting abused some how, and took it upon herself to end it violently (shooting her abuser) and finally, I'm gettin' the drift that your Special Power is time/spatial. [/i]

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Agree with Greiver, we get a lot of deliquents
1:You're birthdate says you are 7, please change this
2:5'7'' is not short for a human female. One char is only 5', another male from your region is only 5'9''
3: If you really want her to look small (this is just a suggestion) don't make her legs long, it makes girls look taller and wider generally
4: She has no way of straightening her hair in this time
5:Not wearing very time-period appropriate clothing... also, what kind of armor?
6:A female of that stature, especially if she is as small as you say, could not use a 50 lb bow... also, there are no compound bows, a weight for resistance is not required
7:Describe more weaknesses
8:RP sample a little weak but not bad... did she cut off his hand or...? (fix spelling)
9:In regards to weapon, is it like a Darth Maul-like double bladed dagger?
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We also get deadbeats, and that's why I stole Mrs. McPherson's deadbeat stamper...

Okay, now for my short list of improvements, cause Drestia took all the good ones:

1) Can you beef up personality, maybe to like at least two lines, it's a little too vague right now.
2) I assume you mean sniping, not snipping... if you do mean snipping, like what, trimming hedges?
3) How can it be tight and manveurable, tight female pants are NOT manveurable... and trust me, I have some expierence with that.
4) My bet is the weapon is a bladed boomerang, which would seriously add too much weight to it, for it to fly properly.
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[QUOTE][QUOTE]1:You're birthdate says you are 7, please change this[/QUOTE]
Drestia is only 6 then because i based it off her
[QUOTE]2:5'7'' is not short for a human female. One char is only 5', another male from your region is only 5'9''
3: If you really want her to look small (this is just a suggestion) don't make her legs long, it makes girls look taller and wider generally[/QUOTE]
I'm 5'7" and I'm the shortest person out of all of my friends and I have long legs
[QUOTE]4: She has no way of straightening her hair in this time[/QUOTE]
hot flat rocks
[QUOTE]5:Not wearing very time-period appropriate clothing... also, what kind of armor?[/QUOTE]
very little armor but what she wears is strong. as said in my register
[QUOTE]6:A female of that stature, especially if she is as small as you say, could not use a 50 lb bow... also, there are no compound bows, a weight for resistance is not required [/QUOTE]
I can
[QUOTE]7:Describe more weaknesses[/QUOTE]
fair enough
[QUOTE]8:RP sample a little weak but not bad... did she cut off his hand or...? (fix spelling)[/QUOTE]
i didn't think you'd like me saying penis
[QUOTE]9:In regards to weapon, is it like a Darth Maul-like double bladed dagger?[/QUOTE]
will upload picture as soon as I get around to it
[QUOTE]1) Can you beef up personality, maybe to like at least two lines, it's a little too vague right now.[/QUOTE]
What else did you have in mind? ;)
[QUOTE]2) I assume you mean sniping, not snipping... if you do mean snipping, like what, trimming hedges?[/QUOTE]
oops
[QUOTE]3) How can it be tight and manveurable, tight female pants are NOT manveurable... and trust me, I have some expierence with that.[/QUOTE]
Remember that time you cane to see me at that restaurant, got a good look at those pants right? remember me telling you the bathroom sucked and the doors were really big to the small frame and i had to crawl up over the top of the stall to get out, that is how pants can be tight and manuverable... plus "for the time period" I doubt that they are jeans or pleather, so I think she'll be good
[QUOTE]For the record, never seen it on your wall[/QUOTE]
no, but you've pulled it out of your foot enough times to know what it looks like
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I fixed mine, you're still 7
5'7'' is not short... just because you PERSONALLY are the shortest of your friends does not make 5'7'' short, it makes you shorter than your friends... average female height is only 5'3''
I was merely pointing out that a short person looks larger(and taller) if she has long legs, not that you had to change it, I just was pointing it out
A "small amount" is not a TYPE, it is an amount... also, where would it be if it was a small amount?
I did not say it was impossible, I was implying it is improbable... besides, you don't need a resistance, you just need the bow.
Please, by all means, say penis... it makes it more interesting... and funny.
I didn't have a problem with the pants part, had a problem with the short skirt over them. It is not a practical coupling, and is a modern style.
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I believe in everything until it's disproved. So I believe in fairies, the myths, dragons. It all exists, even if it's in your mind. Who's to say that dreams and nightmares aren't as real as the here and now? ~John Lennon
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Okay, Drestia pulled her thing's out of Feather's post, so now for mine.

I meant like make it less vague, when I read yours, it seems very 2-D, and not real at all. I want something concrete, like she's not always going to be playful out of battle, why is she playful? ect.

As for the pants... sure you can, but on average, between myself, and bitching with females, I have discovered that they greatly restrict manveurablity. I didn't say you couldn't be, I was merely pointing it out that it restricts it more the loose clothes.
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alright, I had my fun... for now, I'll make some adjustments, but I might need some help with the armor, I know more about weapons then that stuff, and p.s. by her kind I was trying to put it more to the average height of the people in that particular village. Most towns tend to have a certain height, i've noticed, it's really weird, like one town over here people will be short, then another place over there, people tend to be tall, I blame it on stuff in the water.
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Then would that mean she was short for her [b]village[/b] not her kind... and what the hell is in the water, growth horomone?
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[QUOTE]Then would that mean she was short for her village not her kind... and what the hell is in the water, growth horomone?[/QUOTE]
You had to make things difficult lol and I don't know what it is, the government is in charge of all that with their studies and "research" i think they just wanted to see what weird people would come of it.
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Okay, as of surrently, this is what I am noticing:

You say she has little armor, but if you throw in gauntlets and boots you got a full set.

Finally, still not liking 50 pound bow.
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Okay, so now I don't have a problem with it. Since Greiver is no longer doing reg duties, we are now awaiting on Drestia.

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