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Sprite War; Lulzy LP
Topic Started: Jun 11 2009, 03:22 PM (203 Views)
Sarge
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Boredom is an amazing thing. :P

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Raxby
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Tbh I don't like it at all. D:

It just all looks very fake. Sprite's look a bit pasted on and the horizon (where grass goes over in space) looks a bit like a white line. Lens flare is also too bright.

I know you can do better.
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Sarge
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Meh, I was focusing on the concept rather than the GFX on this one. Thanks for the CC, anyway.
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Raxby
Jun 11 2009, 04:19 PM
Tbh I don't like it at all. D:

It just all looks very fake. Sprite's look a bit pasted on and the horizon (where grass goes over in space) looks a bit like a white line. Lens flare is also too bright.

I know you can do better.

wat raxby sed most deff
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concept can be amazing if you remade it but made efx for them and had some of them interacting with one another rather than all just sorta laid out. Obviously many issues with THIS work, bg you can see lines of overlapping stocks. The white line, and the flare.

Redo it and work hard on its and it could be proooooooooooooooooo :D
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Nice concept but the style needs work.
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