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| Still Broken; Letra feita por mim! | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: May 21 2006, 01:17 AM (559 Views) | |
| Johnny | May 21 2006, 01:17 AM Post #1 |
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esta letra fui eu que a fiz... vejam lá se gostam...: chama-se "Still Broken": so many blows i've suffer in my heart because of you! so many questions i've got now someone tell me the true! i've been thinking about you and the things that we shared the questions started to grow i was broken but you didn't care! why were you lying to me? why were i so stupid? why didn't you care about me? why am i still broken?! why were you lying to me? why were i so stupid? why didn't you care about me? why am i still broken?! but i have more questions they don't leave me alone why were you so evil? why is my light still blown? i was flying to the sky with you here by my side but you left me alone and i started to fall why were you lying to me? why were i so stupid? why didn't you care about me? why am i still broken?! i'm sick and tired! i don't care anymore! but why am i lying? i still love a lot! why were you lying to me? why were i so stupid? why didn't you care about me? why am i still broken?! why am i still broken... o que acham? |
![]() To be hurt To feel lost To be left out in the dark To be kicked when you're down To feel like you've been pushed around To be on the edge of breaking down And no one's there to save you No you don't know what it's like Welcome to my life | |
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| Alhos Moles | May 21 2006, 01:38 AM Post #2 |
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A letra tá gira pá :D, por isso merece um tópico só pra ela! Espero que não estejas assim tão partidinho como dizes na música, a malvada que te fez isso não merece tanto :D. |
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| Johnny | May 21 2006, 01:39 AM Post #3 |
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lool... nao por akaso n m sentia assim quando fiz a música mas sentia-me um bocado assim... xateado, farto de certas cenas xD... daí a suposta inspiraçao... ah... obrg pelo post, n tinha reparado nesta secçao
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| Yangsmoth | May 21 2006, 02:18 PM Post #4 |
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Agora podias fazer a música XD |
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"Death looks down at the corpse of the Lover, then turns to the Woman" - Your husband died, do you wish to carry on your life with painful memories? Or do you want to forget him? "The woman sobs" - I'll live with his memory, even if it's painful. "The woman goes, the Warrior turns to Death". - I'm curious, Death. You gave this choice to many people, right? "Yes..." "How many of these lovers chose to forget?" "None, not one." | |
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| Johnny | May 21 2006, 02:20 PM Post #5 |
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talvez um dia kem sabe... eu tenho kem m arranje o acompanhamento
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| Yangsmoth | May 21 2006, 02:22 PM Post #6 |
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Sabes cantar? :P, se não... pede alguém para cantar, quem sabe ainda arranjas futuro como compositor
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"Death looks down at the corpse of the Lover, then turns to the Woman" - Your husband died, do you wish to carry on your life with painful memories? Or do you want to forget him? "The woman sobs" - I'll live with his memory, even if it's painful. "The woman goes, the Warrior turns to Death". - I'm curious, Death. You gave this choice to many people, right? "Yes..." "How many of these lovers chose to forget?" "None, not one." | |
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| Johnny | May 21 2006, 02:23 PM Post #7 |
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loool kem sabe... ker dzr... eu já cantei na igreja, n foi no coro foi a solo e n foi na missa looooooool vou pensar nisso... talvez saia alguma koisa d jeito
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| Yangsmoth | May 21 2006, 02:26 PM Post #8 |
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Não custa nada tentar
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"Death looks down at the corpse of the Lover, then turns to the Woman" - Your husband died, do you wish to carry on your life with painful memories? Or do you want to forget him? "The woman sobs" - I'll live with his memory, even if it's painful. "The woman goes, the Warrior turns to Death". - I'm curious, Death. You gave this choice to many people, right? "Yes..." "How many of these lovers chose to forget?" "None, not one." | |
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| Lamp | May 21 2006, 02:38 PM Post #9 |
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Muito fx a letra. Esta melhor que a minha (NAO tenho
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| ShiningSirio | May 21 2006, 04:25 PM Post #10 |
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Eheh, está muito engraçada a letra, sim.
Agora segue os conselhos que te estão a dar e faz o resto da música, devia ficar giro.
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| wilwarin | May 22 2006, 09:04 PM Post #11 |
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está muito gira, realmente, parece que salta musicalidade logo da letra. com umas guitarras a meio ficava melhor que muitas que andam por aí.
tocas alguma coisa? se tocasses era bom. ou então podias começar a pensar nisso para escrever músicas a sério. é claro que cantar também dava jeito, né?
continua com isso e espero que para a próxima sejas inspirado pelas boas vibrações e não por umas menos boas!
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| Johnny | May 23 2006, 11:46 AM Post #12 |
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pois foi... esta calhou! pena... n toko nda n
... tenho um amigo k tem uma cena (lol n m lembro do nome) k m pode fazer uma batida e tal...
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