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Still Broken; Letra feita por mim!
Topic Started: May 21 2006, 01:17 AM (559 Views)
Johnny
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esta letra fui eu que a fiz... vejam lá se gostam...:

chama-se "Still Broken":

so many blows i've suffer
in my heart because of you!
so many questions i've got now
someone tell me the true!

i've been thinking about you
and the things that we shared
the questions started to grow
i was broken but you didn't care!

why were you lying to me?
why were i so stupid?
why didn't you care about me?
why am i still broken?!

why were you lying to me?
why were i so stupid?
why didn't you care about me?
why am i still broken?!

but i have more questions
they don't leave me alone
why were you so evil?
why is my light still blown?

i was flying to the sky
with you here by my side
but you left me alone
and i started to fall

why were you lying to me?
why were i so stupid?
why didn't you care about me?
why am i still broken?!

i'm sick and tired!
i don't care anymore!
but why am i lying?
i still love a lot!

why were you lying to me?
why were i so stupid?
why didn't you care about me?
why am i still broken?!

why am i still broken...

o que acham?
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To be hurt
To feel lost
To be left out in the dark
To be kicked when you're down
To feel like you've been pushed around
To be on the edge of breaking down
And no one's there to save you
No you don't know what it's like
Welcome to my life
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Alhos Moles
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A letra tá gira pá :D, por isso merece um tópico só pra ela! Espero que não estejas assim tão partidinho como dizes na música, a malvada que te fez isso não merece tanto :D.
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Johnny
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lool... nao por akaso n m sentia assim quando fiz a música mas sentia-me um bocado assim... xateado, farto de certas cenas xD... daí a suposta inspiraçao...

ah... obrg pelo post, n tinha reparado nesta secçao ;)
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To be hurt
To feel lost
To be left out in the dark
To be kicked when you're down
To feel like you've been pushed around
To be on the edge of breaking down
And no one's there to save you
No you don't know what it's like
Welcome to my life
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Yangsmoth
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Agora podias fazer a música XD
"Death looks down at the corpse of the Lover, then turns to the Woman" - Your husband died, do you wish to carry on your life with painful memories? Or do you want to forget him?
"The woman sobs" - I'll live with his memory, even if it's painful.
"The woman goes, the Warrior turns to Death". - I'm curious, Death. You gave this choice to many people, right?
"Yes..."
"How many of these lovers chose to forget?"
"None, not one."
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Johnny
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talvez um dia kem sabe... eu tenho kem m arranje o acompanhamento :P
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To be hurt
To feel lost
To be left out in the dark
To be kicked when you're down
To feel like you've been pushed around
To be on the edge of breaking down
And no one's there to save you
No you don't know what it's like
Welcome to my life
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Yangsmoth
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Sabes cantar? :P, se não... pede alguém para cantar, quem sabe ainda arranjas futuro como compositor :P
"Death looks down at the corpse of the Lover, then turns to the Woman" - Your husband died, do you wish to carry on your life with painful memories? Or do you want to forget him?
"The woman sobs" - I'll live with his memory, even if it's painful.
"The woman goes, the Warrior turns to Death". - I'm curious, Death. You gave this choice to many people, right?
"Yes..."
"How many of these lovers chose to forget?"
"None, not one."
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Johnny
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loool kem sabe... ker dzr... eu já cantei na igreja, n foi no coro foi a solo e n foi na missa looooooool

vou pensar nisso... talvez saia alguma koisa d jeito :P
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To be hurt
To feel lost
To be left out in the dark
To be kicked when you're down
To feel like you've been pushed around
To be on the edge of breaking down
And no one's there to save you
No you don't know what it's like
Welcome to my life
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Yangsmoth
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Não custa nada tentar :P
"Death looks down at the corpse of the Lover, then turns to the Woman" - Your husband died, do you wish to carry on your life with painful memories? Or do you want to forget him?
"The woman sobs" - I'll live with his memory, even if it's painful.
"The woman goes, the Warrior turns to Death". - I'm curious, Death. You gave this choice to many people, right?
"Yes..."
"How many of these lovers chose to forget?"
"None, not one."
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Lamp
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Muito fx a letra. Esta melhor que a minha (NAO tenho :D )

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Eheh, está muito engraçada a letra, sim. :D Agora segue os conselhos que te estão a dar e faz o resto da música, devia ficar giro. :mrgreen:
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está muito gira, realmente, parece que salta musicalidade logo da letra. com umas guitarras a meio ficava melhor que muitas que andam por aí. :D tocas alguma coisa? se tocasses era bom. ou então podias começar a pensar nisso para escrever músicas a sério. é claro que cantar também dava jeito, né? :P continua com isso e espero que para a próxima sejas inspirado pelas boas vibrações e não por umas menos boas! ^_^
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Johnny
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pois foi... esta calhou!

pena... n toko nda n :/ :( ... tenho um amigo k tem uma cena (lol n m lembro do nome) k m pode fazer uma batida e tal... :D
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To be hurt
To feel lost
To be left out in the dark
To be kicked when you're down
To feel like you've been pushed around
To be on the edge of breaking down
And no one's there to save you
No you don't know what it's like
Welcome to my life
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