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Toopoxia NSWiki; Feedback?
Topic Started: Apr 3 2010, 02:07 AM (95 Views)
Saartie
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I was wondering if someone could give me feedback on my NSwiki page

http://www.nswiki.net/index.php?title=Toopoxia

I wanted to see first if people think I'm heading in the right direction, whether it's too obvious that a lot is adapted from RL wiki entries (the history is a combination of several national histories) whether the original entries are very jarring against the adaptions (specifically the economic section where the first two paragraphs are originals) and whether the pictures you think add to are take away from the rest of the article.

The page itself is incomplete, I wanted to get some feedback at this point before I carry on, in any case i'm only looking for feedback up to the Economic section, everything underneath is either empty or still a work in progress.

Thanks in advance for critique.
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